As the window fell,
I saw the aspects of you.
Hidden within the shine.
No gathering of thoughts.
Just waves of knowing
that the way you were,
was sitting on the edge.
Always looking below
to see if the winds were near.
Nothing blocked me from
the thoughts of looking
towards the inner glow.
Tilting forward to catch
the melting tides of
what I knew.
~ JC ~
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17 comments:
Beautiful!
That is just wonderful. It brought a tear to my eye (and a bit of jealousy because I know I couldn't ever write anything like that even though I wish I could).
Very nice. It brings back memories of times past.
Lovely words today.
Very nice-- strong. I love that you saw the light and I saw the glass.
Magpies are so much fun!
Very strong-- well said. I love how you saw the light and reflection.
i like that, knowing someone by feel, not by the mind.
how lovely, your commitment to writing is an inspiration. Love Helen, Darcy and Bingley xx
That was so nice. Thanks for coming by our blog. We like your blog a lot too. Looking forward to reading more of your writing. Take care.
That is very pretty! I like it better when the window doesn't fall though!
Awesome!
This is WONDERFUL! It spoke to me, it flowed and I loved it.
beautiful words
Some Magpies are just so much lovelier than the others
Intimate, effective piece.
ah, for such beauty of words :)
My Magpie Post
divine piece.
beautiful write…
Invite you to join poets rally week 42 by sharing a free verse today.
You will love the encouragements you get once you are in and make commitment.
Your poetry rocks!
awards for you!
Hope to see you in!
Have A Blessed Easter!
xxx
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