Tuesday, April 12, 2011

Melting Tides

As the window fell, 
I saw the aspects of you.
Hidden within the shine.
No gathering of thoughts.
Just waves of knowing
that the way you were,
was sitting on the edge.
Always looking below
to see if the winds were near.
Nothing blocked me from
the thoughts of looking
towards the inner glow.
Tilting forward to catch
the melting tides of
what I knew.
~ JC ~

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17 comments:

Remington said...

Beautiful!

Amy and The House of Cats said...

That is just wonderful. It brought a tear to my eye (and a bit of jealousy because I know I couldn't ever write anything like that even though I wish I could).

Nancy said...

Very nice. It brings back memories of times past.

Sally in WA said...

Lovely words today.

LeAnn said...

Very nice-- strong. I love that you saw the light and I saw the glass.
Magpies are so much fun!

LeAnn said...

Very strong-- well said. I love how you saw the light and reflection.

Everyday Goddess said...

i like that, knowing someone by feel, not by the mind.

Purrfect Haven said...

how lovely, your commitment to writing is an inspiration. Love Helen, Darcy and Bingley xx

Marg said...

That was so nice. Thanks for coming by our blog. We like your blog a lot too. Looking forward to reading more of your writing. Take care.

Brian said...

That is very pretty! I like it better when the window doesn't fall though!

Noll said...

Awesome!

Donna B said...

This is WONDERFUL! It spoke to me, it flowed and I loved it.

Emily Young said...

beautiful words

Trellissimo said...

Some Magpies are just so much lovelier than the others

Steve Isaak said...

Intimate, effective piece.

Vinay said...

ah, for such beauty of words :)

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divine piece.

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