Thursday, September 16, 2010

Two Girls


Two young girls walking along the path of life.

One asks the other, "What are you listening to ?"
The musical one says, "Time Time Time. You know that song."
"Yeah. The one by that girl band."
"Anyway, it's been going on in my head all day."
"What's on the road today?"
"I don't really know."
"Dust looks like it to me."
"Maybe an apple tree."
"Who are you a poet?"
"Nope, just a goofball who can't sing."
"When I get home I'm going to look up those words."
"Yeah, sure you are."
"Now, let's get something to eat."
"Walk a mile in my flips why don't you ?"
"Seriously."

Behind them was a dust trail that lead past the apple tree.
A bird was sitting on the wire above it.
As it flew away you could hear them both singing
"Time Time Time"
And, that is what they had today.
Walking in their flip flops
down the road
singing a song.

~ JC ~

(I do have to say that I am trying to write.
 I'm not good at it.
 I'm just throwing out my thoughts.
 Not good at all but this is what I was picturing in my head)


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24 comments:

The Kool~Kittie~Krew said...

That was a great post and I think you write beautifully. I love your blog!

Amy and The House of Cats said...

I think that you are a great writer - that was a wonderful post!

Dianne said...

I loved it. It had wonderful imagery - I could see the girls, the dust, the flip-flops

It had a bit of whimsy
and it was touching and thoughtful

feel good about your work
your work made me feel good :)

Remington said...

That was GREAT! You write very well!

Kea said...

I always enjoy what you write, even if I don't always leave a comment. You're far better at it than many published so-called "authors."

Just Me said...

Aren't we all just trying to write? None of us are perfect. This poem was very well written and included excellent imagery. I think you did a fabulous job!!

kathew said...

not only culd I see those two walking down the road in their dusty flip flops-I could hear them singing. Nice Magpie

Anonymous said...

Wow neat! This is a really great site! I am wondering if anyone else has come across something
similar in the past? Keep up the great work!

Tumblewords: said...

A delightful scene - vivid imagery and lovely choice of words!

Darlene said...

I think that is lovely. Hope you have a wonderful weekend.♥

KathyB. said...

You wrote that? I was ready to read the rest of the story. Very intriguing. As a woman of , well, more than 5 decades of living, and most of the living has been done in flip-flops even in winter, I can relate, so I want to know the rest of the story, please?

Feral Female said...

You are quite a skilled writer!Wonderful imagery in that post!

willow said...

Always good to walk a mile in someone else's flips!

Brian said...

I thought it was great, I got those pictures in my head too!

Zuzu said...

Nice magpie! Keep it up!

Martin H. said...

I really enjoyed this.

Rene/ Not The Rockefellers said...

This was a lovely little walk
I could hear their flip flops thwacking down the raod in time to the music :)

Rene

kathi harris said...

I luv the scene u set of these 2 girls walking down the rd so carefree.

Lori at Jarvis House said...

I love the verses about walking down the road. Time, Time, Time. I don't know that song. I'll have to look it yp. I do know "Time is on my side," by the Stones.

ocdbloggergirl said...

That was pure genius!

=(^*^)=


Hazy Shade of Winter, love that too

Brian Miller said...

arent we all....i think that is all we can do is try...some days it works, some days it soesnt...i would say this one worked for you...nice magpie...

Carolina Mountains said...

Great imagery - I liked the verse!

Lydia said...

I thought Brian Miller said it all, so I will just say "ditto"!

ms pie said...

you write beautifully.. keep writing... friendship is everything...yeah, girl power...

There comes a time in your life when you walk away from all of the drama and the people who create it. You surround yourself with people who make you laugh. Forget the bad and focus on the good. Love the people who treat you right and pray for those who don’t. Life is too short to be anything but happy. Falling down is part of life, getting back up is living.

~ Jose N. Harris

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