Monday, August 2, 2010

Who are they ?

Two ladies are walking down a street
No one can hear what they are saying
Just hands and faces moving
A grin here a laugh there
Who are they ?
What did they just do ?
Bread in a basket
Coffee being held
Down the alley they go
A door opens into a flower garden
A bench  waits for their arrival
They both go in and close the door
Don't you wish you had that key ?
~ JC ~
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17 comments:

clairz said...

Wow, this is wonderfully evocative--both the words and the photo.

Helen said...

In my mind ... this would be the key to friendship! Nicely written....

kathew said...

love it! Reminds me of my wonderful women friends!

Remington said...

Very nice....yes, I wish I had the key....

Jacqueline said...

You always write so that I want more!..Happy week!

signed...bkm said...

Great write - leaving a lot of wonder... I like that...bkm

The Creek Cats said...

LOVE the photo of the lock! Great writing too!

one more believer said...

i like this novella... enticing the reader to explore as well....

Jingle said...

magical,
simply walk into a beautiful place.

lovely tale!

Stafford Ray said...

A neat little sequence that is isolated in time, its beginning unknown and its end behind a locked door. But for you the question remains and that is why you write! Stickybeak! :-)

Feral Female said...

Loved it! I thought of the key as being the key to friendship as well.

Roses and Lilacs said...

A secret garden behind a locked door. Romance and mystery, the very best things to stretch my imagination.
Marnie

Jennifer said...

Oh, love this! I love to create fantastic (unlikely) tales about the people I see in and around my daily travels. It would be fun to create a bunch of scenarios about your two ladies! :-)

Naturegirl said...

Great writing,yes I'd say a secret garden awaits these two friends!Leaves me wanting more!

The Taylor CatSSSSS said...

What a beautiful read!

Tumblewords: said...

Oh, lovely. Yes, I wish I had the key!

Dianne said...

lovely words that invoke wonderful touching images :)

There comes a time in your life when you walk away from all of the drama and the people who create it. You surround yourself with people who make you laugh. Forget the bad and focus on the good. Love the people who treat you right and pray for those who don’t. Life is too short to be anything but happy. Falling down is part of life, getting back up is living.

~ Jose N. Harris

Characters In My Garden

Purr Gang ~ My five cats

Cats ~ Al, Ashton Rosevelt, Jasmine Marie, Riley Andrew & Meredith Ann

Fur Gang ~ Jodie Isabella and Sally Jean
(The Original member, Sweet Bella is in memory only now. Maddy Jean, another original member, past away in August of 2014)

Mr. Boatman ~ my husband who likes boats

DD ~ my daughter who graduated and is now out living in the real world

DS or Dson ~ my son is studying computer science and math



Maddy Jean & Bella

Maddy Jean & Bella
Both gone but never forgotten

Jodie Isabella

Jodie Isabella

Al

Al
I adopted him from our local Humane Society

Ashton

Ashton
Adopted from my local horse supply store

Jasmine

Jasmine
I adopted her from Purrfect Pals

Riley

Riley
I adopted him from the local Humane Society

Meredith Ann

Meredith Ann
I adopted her from Purrfect Pals